Parallel Structure & Concise Topic Sentences

Parallel Structure & Concise Topic Sentences

Use parallel structure and conciseness to express yourself!

The following topic sentences contain lists. Select the sentence that is well written with parallel structure. Avoid repetition of the same word(s) if possible, and use the correct word forms.

Example:
Not parallel: Gerald is intelligent, good-looking, and people like him. (adjective, adjective, clause)

Parallel: Gerald is intelligent, good -looking, and likeable. (adjective, adjective, adjective)