INTRO
THESIS There are many advantages to owning your own home.
POD You
can do so many projects with the home and eventually call the home my own.
BODY #1
TOPIC SENDTENCE
#1 When owning a home there are so many projects that i can do, like
changing the exterior and interior.
DETAIL #1
Repaint the inside and outside of the house.
EXAMPLE Paint rooms, kitchen or bathrooms
EXAMPLE Paint color of house outside
DETAIL #2
Garden
EXAMPLE Put nice plants (daisy's, rose bushes, lilies)
EXAMPLE Taking or adding trees (big/small tress, palm trees, or
bushes)
DETAIL #3
Adding additions.
EXAMPLE Add rooms to make larger or efficiency to rent out.
EXAMPLE Adding a pool, non-existing driveway or wider ones.
BODY #2
TOPIC SENTENCE #2 Everyone who owns a home likes the fact that they can say
its theirs.
DETAIL
#1 It is an actual place i can call my own.
EXAMPLE Just the feeling of it being mine.
EXAMPLE Not worry about being someone else's home
DETAIL #2
Pass down from generation to generation
EXAMPLE Kids can grow up in it.
EXAMPLE Grandkids, kids, kids can grown up in and talk about how
it has been in the family for years..
DETAIL #3 Not
worry about moving as much or even at all.
EXAMPLE Your kids don't have to worry about making new friends
or go to a new school.
EXAMPLE Not being bothered by the owner, which may cause me to
move because the sell the house.
CONCLUSION
Not owning a home is definitely a hassle. luckily, there are many advantages
to owning a home. i can fix the house with different projects to satisfy my
taste. i can also enjoy that great feeling of just being able to say " I own
a home".